This picture could have been improved by choosing another location. It was shot through a window as we also chose where we were gonna shot it. Also im right in the middle which breaks the rule of thirds, so maybe have me on the right as the other main character is going to come from the left side.
In this picture you can see on the background that is not needed at all such as a coat on the floor and oms boxes on top of the lockers, Next time we could change the angle of the camer so you can olnly see the main guy and the lockers as its the only things we really needed in the shot.
You can see the door and the posters on the background which is not needed. also we could have cropped the imaged on the sides as theres white background on the right that its pointless as its not explaining whats happening on the scene.
There is a lot of background in this picture that its useless and also a lot of other stuff in the picture which would distract the audience when looking at the picture. Also the table doesn't need to be in the way, and you dont know if the character is opening or closing the door. He is kind of in the middle but more to the right which is kind of good as there is space to move for the character.
Again there is too much background in this picture, such as the chair is in the way and theres posters everywhere. Also this picture is breaking the rule of thirds as he is right in the middle. It would be a good idea to get the right chair out of the way and crop the image in the left side so hes got some space on the right to give space to what he is looking at.
There is a lot of space and empty tables and chairs that its not needed in that shot. Also you can see the yellow folder which wasn't there before which would confuse the audience.
The rule of thirds has been used okay in my opinion and also the over the shoulder shot along with the camera angle.
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